Thursday, February 22, 2018

Commercial Pitch of Product 3/12



Hello, Name is Kyle Thompson President of P.A.S.S. Personal Assistant of Secure Systems. Today is your lucky day sir, I have a brand new product that will revolutionize everything YOU do in life. Have you ever wondered why you even bother learning that new electronic gadget when it is just going by outdated months after you purchase it? 

If you answered YES then I have the perfect all in one product for you. 

TED – (Technology Evolved Device) is about the size of one grain of rice and holds over 5 Yobibytes of memory. This little device is imputed in behind either ear by a our skilled surgeons in a simple out patient procedure. This device acts as a replacement to each and everything that is electronic in your life. No more cell phones, PDA’s, laptops, organizers, cameras, and pads of scratch paper with that little Hunny To Do List written on it. This little baby can do all of those products jobs with ease and because TED is already inside you, you never have to worry about not having it.

TED is going to be featured in this next month’s issues of New England Medicine and Money Pro. 

All of these features and starting at 2 very low price points. Buy this machine now and you are guaranteed a $9.95 price for adults and $19.95 price infants and the elderly. Both come with our limited multi-year guarantee. 

So I ask you this what do you have to lose, this is the product that will revolutionize the human race. So how many can I sign you up for?

Internal Notes below
1. Hook - With a catchy intro 
2. Sell - What makes it unique
3. Request - Feedback, advice or business card


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